Floral Pattern – Balance Method

The picture on the left was a supposed invitation letter, wherein floral pattern was applied as downloaded brush practice.
Several mistakes was pointed out by the instructor.
First, Arial font is not good enought for highely decorated design.
Also, title font is handwritten font. All letters are supposed to be connected.

Socond, foggy blur behind the text is not necessary. This is not helping the legibility at all.

Finally, Top half and bottom half are unbalanced. Bottom is finely decorative but top half is whitish and too light, comparing to the bottom. In short, top is too light and bottom is too heavy.

The picture on the right was after editing all recommendations.
Right. This looks much balanced.